After so many months of talking about it, I'm finally sharing one of the trope writings I've done. It was getting to the point where I wasn't working on it enough and I thought, "If I don't finish this right now, I never will." Thus I cranked a good 1/2-2/3 of this out in two days.
I love a good critique, so if you've got something to say about the story, positive or negative, lay it on me. I can handle anything you throw at me. It's a first draft and needs work and I'd love your input.
So here it is.
