@MangaKid:

Hehe, well when you put it that way then yeah, that's pretty cool~ Thank you~ <3
Oh my goodness! I had such big plans but no time to make them.... >.> Darn it Christmas, slow the heck down...

@ChiPolVee:

Its true inspiration driving you if you can write very well without planning the whole story in a technical way and such, you know? You just go with the flow of inspiration!
Haha you are awesome! And LOL 2 months til Christmas doesn't give us enough time, I know!!! xD

@MangaKid:

True inspiration?? Hm???
Oh you're the sweetest friend! Thank you! Anything at anytime will make me happy~ XD I have no idea what to do for you all for Christmas... I need IDEAS!!

@ChiPolVee:

Lol thats true inspiration ;) Yup keep it up! I'll comment more in detail when I read more in detail!
YESH!! Cuz you're an awesome friend, Chi! ^U^ I just hope I can pull it off xD It might be a Christmas gift if I don't get it done soon, but rest assured that I will give you something (cuz the idea is stuck in my head! :D)

@MangaKid:

Oh, I'm writing this as I go, that's how I write just about everything~ XD But thank you for commenting here and skimming~ I'm glad you like it a little~ <3 Oh!!! A comic for me?! But I've done nothing to warrant a gift!! Th-thank you so much! I mean I will love it! B-but why?? I love you!! <3

@ChiPolVee:

Its an honor to comment and read your writing! I was able to skim through it and I like seeing Alice's story, its really interesting and sad, poor girl. Are you writing this as you go? or just re-typing an original story of yours? I shall definitely try to keep up with your work^^ And I'm also trying to start a little drawing/comic for you, but its a secret until I can get other things finished! x3

@MangaKid:

Yes I kind of am~ But don't worry about it~ If you don't have time, its fine! Thank you for commenting at all~

YAY!! you finally are showcasing your writing ability!!! ^U^
I'm getting offline now cuz of always-busy-life xD but I will return very soon and take some time to read your first two chapters here! I almost missed this world seeing I haven't been online lately (dog-sitting and today I got my wisdom teeth out UGH)
Anyway good for you in making this world :)

@kita mikichi:

Yay! You like it! Thank you! (Hehe, yup yup~)

Oh oh, your advice would be totally helpful please tell me anything I can fix to make this better~ Thank you so much~ <3

Wah, poor Alice!! (That's why she loves Batman!!)

Really like it so far! There are some places where you're telling things that would be stronger shown. (Talk to you more in a bit, maybe by PM -- mobile is not kind to comment boxes!)

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

What do you mean? I've read it many times~ I want to know your thoughts~ <3

@ChiPolVee:

Read it over.

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

Did it really hit you that hard? Why? If I may ask...

@ChiPolVee:

I'm okay, just a little shaken.

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

I'm sorry! I sincerely hope it didn't upset you too much! It gets better I promise!!

@ChiPolVee:

Yeah, but it punched me in the heart.

@Kazamas-Keyblade:

Hm? What do you mean? Is that a good thing? Do you like the story?

Damn, this alone just punched me in the chest.

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Oh okay! Good~ XD Thank you so much Bou~ <3

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I'm sorry... I hope you liked it even a little bit... 3:

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What's wrong?? I'm sorry!