World's name: Babygurl's Mind
Creator: babygurl24
Date created: 10/02/09
Type/category: Personal
Members /guest poster so far: 5
Description (as by the creator): This is the first world that I created so it may be a little rocky. But it is basically a place to update people on everything.
Review by beloved blood:
Babygurl's Mind [world XD] is more like a blog, telling of everyday life. I would recommend this to anyone who wants to read up on people (and not in a stalker way O.o), like a blog. It's always fun to read about funny and weird things that happen everyday! Also, the design is nice, cute bg. You can read the words. There are posts regularly!!! I give this world, a big 4.5 out of 5!!! I think there should be more pictures or videos or something.
Review by Support KIRA:
Alright, First I’m going to start with the design, since usually that is the first thing to draw people in. The background picture is cute, though a bit repetitive due to it’s size, it’s just a little small. I would suggest finding something with a more uniform look. Try sites that offer seamless background pix. Those are amazing, and they have awesome designs. Here’s a link to one: http://www.fatstrawberry.com/ .This place is GREAT. I really recommend it. ;)
Next, the introduction. Well, the lack of one. ^^; Even if it is just a blog page, wouldn’t it be nice to give your visitors a peek of what you’re about to offer them? You can put anything you like. A Nice Picture, some info about yourself, or a brief explanation of just what kind of world they’ve entered. Any or all of these things would suffice, and I really think it would be a nice addition.
Now for the content. This is a blog about Babygurl’s current life events. I’m guessing it’s a bit like a journal. What I would suggest is to add other things as well, instead of just blogs. Like, maybe you found a really cool picture online? Or a video, or song? Share what you like with your viewers, after all, you want them to know a bit about YOU right? ^^ Shake it up a bit and keep them guessing.
I’m going to rate this 3 stars only because it seems that it’s only in it’s start, being updated once every week. A few renovations would definitely help. Good Luck!! ^^
Review by aoi:
Babygurl's Mind, as the name stated is a blog-like world where babygurl posts updates on her personal stuff. Regurlarly updated, people can get to know more about her and all sorts of random stuff. Not to miss one function that this world serves, is it also a place for her friends/ guest posters to post updates on whatever topic they like. so, if u are interested, i suggest u pm her or leave her a comment and maybe u can post your stuff to make this world livelier. and also dont forget to comment on her posts as your comments really matters. do check this world out if u like to read blog-like stuff. 4.2 stars for the fun posts.
Overall stars: 3.9 out of 5 (great!)
What we say: for those who love to read on updates of people, visit this world!
Link to the world: click HERE
World's name: In Between
Creator: babygurl24
Date created: 23/10/09
Type/category: Personal
Members /guest poster so far: N/A
Description (as by the creator): It's a world dedicated to a book I am writing. Kind of like episodes (Part 1, Part 2 etc.) or maybe even a writing column.
Review by greenLeAf863:
>babygurl24's world, In Between is one heck of a world! The storyline of In Between is an addictive realistic fiction that I would recommend for mostly teenage girls between grades 6 to high school, but who am I to tell you what you want to read? Everyone should check out this world and its fantastic story created by none other than theOtaku's very own babygurl24 ! Her story contains twists that you won't expect and her characters are so colorful and unique that you can picture them as a real person.
There are 2 chapters up on her world so far but I have a feeling she will add much more. In her posts, there are a few spelling mistakes but who doesn't make spelign mistakes (lolz)! XD One recommendation would be to choose a cool theme and decorate the background of her world with pictures or colors to attract more readers. I would also recommend that babygurl24 make each chapter in her Table of Contents a link to each individual posts, so that way when she adds more posts, her readers may go to a specific chapter. My last suggestion is too include the Summary or a link to the summary in the introduction to her world.
This world deserves a 4 out of 5 stars^___^ Everyone should check out this world or miss out on a great world.
Review by ShingetsuHime:
>In between by babygurl24 , is an excellent read. I couldn’t stop! It has a good plot line complete with amazing description from the very start. I don’t see anything wrong with it other than there being not enough posts! I cant wait to read more. My recommendation to others? Read it. My rating? 4.5. good job!
Review by aoi:
>For those who love teenage life fiction. this is the one for you. The story line is great and will keep you intact. An inspiring writer indeed, babygurl24 managed to pull the readers into the story with great plot and a good writing style. But every writer need feedback in order to improve the work. So I suggest for those of you who are interested, do visit this world, read her work and dont forget to leave your constructive comments there. 4 stars here!
Overall stars: 4.2 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: Do visit this world and enjoy a great read!
Link to the world: click HERE
