wow good luck in the competition
I luv this,I could never write a poem like this
You did an amzing job
You should take a look at mine too if you have time
Its called Indigo
but I doubt my story is as good as yours
O_O wow... no pitch fork and torches here!~ 10/10 Only mistake I found is that you spelled Choked with a 'c' before the'k' change that and it shall be uber perfect -^_^-
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
Really scary and well written...I think (english is also not her native language).
Last edited by ShadowLight at 6:04:47 PM EDT on October 19, 2008.
The crazy bubbly shadow
blueangel110
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
wow good luck in the competition
I luv this,I could never write a poem like this
You did an amzing job
You should take a look at mine too if you have time
Its called Indigo
but I doubt my story is as good as yours
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
Awww... scary and sad at the same time!
Good luck in the competition, fellow competitor
*hugs*
~SG
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/18/08 | Reply
@jannycats:
No problem -^_^-
jannycats
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/18/08 | Reply
@ShizukoxIchimaru:
Thank you very much! Also thank you for telling me about that spelling mistake *changes* Appreciated!
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/18/08 | Reply
O_O wow... no pitch fork and torches here!~ 10/10 Only mistake I found is that you spelled Choked with a 'c' before the'k' change that and it shall be uber perfect -^_^-