OHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOD. just perfect. "Why?" I loved that. I had completely forgotten about the second sword. Just a great ending.
How do those trap doors work? Are Aaron and the others aloud to see the fight? And have you already explained what Aarons wish was because i can't seem to remember...
couple of grammer mistakes that even spell check wouldn't catch.
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/28/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
Thank you!! Yeah, I was hoping that the reader would also forget the small mention of the second sword.
The trap doors are pulled open with a mechanism. Aaron's wish hasn't been told yet.
Yeah, but I'm haven't also fixed the grammar mistakes in the typed version but in my binder they're fixed.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/28/10 | Reply
OHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOD. just perfect. "Why?" I loved that. I had completely forgotten about the second sword. Just a great ending.
How do those trap doors work? Are Aaron and the others aloud to see the fight? And have you already explained what Aarons wish was because i can't seem to remember...
couple of grammer mistakes that even spell check wouldn't catch.