@TwistedCyberChick:

You're right. I was tired.

Eep.

Stories can run the risk of someone trying to get every little piece of detail about everything that at some point.

I think you're tired. ^.^'

This is a trap I struggle to avoid at times. Breaking up sentence lengths helps the material flow smoothly, but it can be a challenge to force myself to restructure something once I've noticed how long it's gotten.

Thanks for the update, and I'll be sure to KISS more often. =P

When I first read the word kiss in the beginning for a few seconds I thought you were going to explain the word and its contexts.

*giggles*

Good workshop, SG! I´ll be sure to keep that in mind when I start building my portfolio in the next few months.