Otaku Summoner (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/04/08 | Reply
@Anomaly:
May I ask for further clarification by what you mean by "choppy." It could help me improve... or not... anyway...
I think I should brace myself...
Fire away.
Internet Champion (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
Too choppy for my liking.
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
Really good horror story. Congrats.
The crazy bubbly shadow
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
AGH!!!!!!! -runs and hides- great story 10'd -looks around paranoid now- aw crap... >._.<
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
oh my, this nearly scared the crap out of me!XD (which means it's a good story:P lolz) Good luck, my fellow competitor! *hugs*
~SG
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
That was totally amazing dude great stroy, I was sort of nervous through out it great, well written too keep it up
Zero
jomz
Otaku Summoner (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/04/08 | Reply
@Anomaly:
May I ask for further clarification by what you mean by "choppy." It could help me improve... or not... anyway...
I think I should brace myself...
Fire away.
Anomaly
Internet Champion (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
Too choppy for my liking.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
Really good horror story. Congrats.
The crazy bubbly shadow
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
AGH!!!!!!! -runs and hides- great story 10'd -looks around paranoid now- aw crap... >._.<
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
oh my, this nearly scared the crap out of me!XD
*hugs*
(which means it's a good story:P lolz)
Good luck, my fellow competitor!
~SG
zero guardian
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
That was totally amazing dude
great stroy, I was sort of nervous through out it
great, well written too
keep it up
Zero