No I am talking about in the largest paragraph where it goes
This one manage to get a few punches into me however when his arm was extend I sank my fangs. He two was motionless. I went over to the tigress, she was having a bit of trouble with a female human.
Cat14
I'm Not Dead! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
@Kratos Cruxis:
I know a few other grammar Nazi. I'm use to people pick at my grammar. ^-^
Kratos Cruxis
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
@Cat14:
xD I am... a grammar nazi... for life. *hides from bullets* =U I get kinda OCD, OTL, with it xD which is why I point it out.
Cat14
I'm Not Dead! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
@Kratos Cruxis:
There it is. Thank you, for letting me know. I don't mind when people point out stuff like my grammar. Anything to help with my writing I welcome
Kratos Cruxis
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
@Cat14:
No I am talking about in the largest paragraph where it goes
This one manage to get a few punches into me however when his arm was extend I sank my fangs. He two was motionless. I went over to the tigress, she was having a bit of trouble with a female human.
It should be too meaning also.
Cat14
I'm Not Dead! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
@Kratos Cruxis:
Oops. Sorry, goes and fixes. I must have missed that one. I was very tired will writing this.
Edit: I'm a bit confused with your response.
The wording is. "She too became motionless"
Last edited by Cat14 at 12:36:28 PM CDT on August 9, 2010.
Kratos Cruxis
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/09/10 | Reply
He two was motionless.
Too not two. Anyways, everything else was fine. <_< sorry you have found a grammar nazi.