- Created By SirLawliet
A heart that isn't cold.
Theres a new post in Restless Words. Its the first part of the story Im writing.....Shores of Edlyn.
Please go check it out. Im open to all criticism and compliments. Dont be scared to voice your opinions. I want to know where I could improve on my writings. And I will personally thank you for all that you say.... but dont get too out of hand...don't be such an.... A Jerk.
However, you may find that its nealry perfect the way it is...
Keep in mind, its yuri-based. Its written in first person by a girl. No, I dont mean a girl wrote the story.... Its simply her story shes telling...in the present.
Now to begin part 2, or volume 2 as I like to say. Though, it might prove to be a challenge for me. I dont want to create a problem for the story...but all stories have some kind of problem..so I guess its only natural. Then again, has the problem already risen in part 1? OOOooo, who knows...only time will tell.
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