@tsubasachro:

Sounds great! I can't wait!

And your very welcome! Anything I can do to help I will!
^^

matt

@kisskiss-bangbang:

Thank you agian!
Your comments have been very helpful!
I think I know what I need to do in the future to make it less confusing! ^^

I am glad you're interested!
Hopefully it'll come out good!
If I think I can make it long enough I will make a seperate world for it...

~Tsu

@tsubasachro:

Your very welcome!

And its only a little confusing with some parts. I'm not sure whos talking sometimes.

^^'

But anyway i'd love to see what you make of this! I'm so intrested now!

matt

@kisskiss-bangbang:

Thanks!!!
I am glad that you liked it!

I can see how the gaps can be confusing, I shall be sure to work on that for my next post!

Thank you agian!

~Tsu

Moooooo!

I love it!
My my my its wounderful!

What i think you could add onto is the layout of the story. Its a bit confusing with the gap placements and stuff. That might just be an mistake but something to look into.

And i think 'Nigh Shop' is perfect! Maybe use that for a title?

matt