i cant criticize very well so i shall compliment^^ i lik how u put a ton of detail in the hands

I think it's cute,
but his arm looks like it's been dislocated or something. O__o
Owwie.

And she's wearing overall things! awww.

Hm...His hand is too large. You should scoot her closer to him, too, so you can make his arm shorter. It looks good, though. I like her pigtails. n__n