It is a very nice story I must say, and I would like to read more. You are good with description there and building up the atmosphere. :D
I do hope that you will continue to write, but you must understand that here people usually don't read stories (unless it is RP) and even if they do, they don't comment much. Just make sure that you write in smaller parts and I do hope that more people will read your story, because it is interesting. I know that I will.^^
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/11 | Reply
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Ok, thanks! I'll PM you.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/11 | Reply
@LightFykki:
Thanks! I will continue to write it now that I know people read it. And I guess I could write it in shorter parts if that'd make it easier to read.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/11 | Reply
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Thank you!
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
LightFykki
Drachen Herz (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/28/11 | Reply
It is a very nice story I must say, and I would like to read more. You are good with description there and building up the atmosphere. :D
I do hope that you will continue to write, but you must understand that here people usually don't read stories (unless it is RP) and even if they do, they don't comment much. Just make sure that you write in smaller parts and I do hope that more people will read your story, because it is interesting. I know that I will.^^