I came here looking for some info about the world/story to do your prize request and enjoyed this little story snippet! I’m glad they’ll be okay!!

Just one thing (and something I’ve struggled with too): It’s a little bit hard to tell what’s going on in some parts because there’s not much description. For instance, in the part with Lucard and his buddies at the bar, I got confused because I thought only two people were talking at first, but then more names started popping up as the scene went on. Just having a little bit at the outset saying something like, “Three men were sitting at the bar,” would help. ^^