i don't really want to change them.. i just think that i'm creeped out at myself for writing them.. and besides if i think they suck what would be teh point of posting them? i dunno... i claim boredom..

I feel like
I should respond to your poetry with more poetry, so I will be writing some in the books for you.
I love your style, and your symbolism, it's abstract but clear.
I don't think you should change either of them, I think you should leave them as they are.

but that's just my oppinion.