I love it!!! Sounds just like Nagaru Tanigawa-A brilliant sequal to mine!
There's just a couple capitilization errors, and "made" should be "maid", but I know you wrote this all at once, and probably was going to plan on correcting it later.
Also, if you want a trophy, and this to your favorite posts-and any other fan fictions of yours!
scoodi
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/12/10 | Reply
@1dev13:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. x3
I'll try to go back and fix all that.
1dev13
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/12/10 | Reply
There's just a couple capitilization errors, and "made" should be "maid", but I know you wrote this all at once, and probably was going to plan on correcting it later.
Also, if you want a trophy, and this to your favorite posts-and any other fan fictions of yours!