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*blush* Is it really that good lina? I thought it is a bit messed up? Because you know, it's still rather confusing

Well, you can try to publish yours too!! I would love to read it

I am sorry for the late replies, I just got home today from a vacation

Yeah, the name is Lacus Clyne (supposedly) it's really okay though it's not unfriendly. Some people even call me clyney

@Clyne Lacus:

For u...anytime! XD And I'll be cheering for u!! GO LACUS...DO UR BEST!!

@Support KIRA:

Okay!!! Thanks for the feedback!! i'll try doing my best!! LOL!

@Clyne Lacus:

Ah I see. Hmm...to make flashbacks I think u have to put more description. O.o it's really hard to explain, but as u go over it again and again...u'll figure it out! LOL!

@Support KIRA:

Thank you kira!! Yes, it is scattered in the beginning... I was thinking to make it like flashback, but I can't figure out how, so it ends up like that i took some of the names from Shakespeare's plays

Wow...I can see u've probably been thinking up this storyline for awhile huh?? It sounds good. At first things are a little scattered but this is just the beginning so I totally understand LOL!! Balthazar...that's a name of one of my characters as well!! Except he's a vampire, not a warlock! Nice new world Lacus! I'm looking forward to ur posts!!