@bluhart:

Happy to hear you're willing to give it a try. Good luck. I'm sure you'll do fine.

@bloodunderrazor:

ok i guess ur rite I GUESS!i dint say u wererite but still i guess i culd try that

@bluhart:

I think you're selling yourself to short. And putting to much preasure on yourself. It will come to you, you just have to give it the time it needs and don't force it.

@bloodunderrazor:

i already tried that and it dint work instead i started 2 fall asleep frm reading the poem it was so boring!

@bluhart:

Well, try writing a different way. There are a zillion ways to write poetry. Find a new niche and continue on a new route. Maybe that's what you need for new inspiration.

@bloodunderrazor:

that was very insightful and idk i just cant use words like i did now im not sure watz wrong but i want 2 write agn since iv seen how much othrz like but i cant use words that way nemore...

Hello. I've gone over your poetry and I'm going to say that you shouldn't give up. It shouldn't matter if your poetry is to dark. Or if other's feel bad after they've read it. You're writing to express yourself. And look at it from this perspective, writers write to impract others whilst they are expressing themselves. They write to make people feel. And people shouldn't be happy all the time. You should be proud to bring emotion into other's lives, as it proves they have the ability to feel sympathy and empathy. It's a gift. And you have it. So you should use it for yourself, if not for anyone else.

i cant i already mada a promise not 2

PS: Do it for Ed. ^-^

No! your just so good. no,no please!

P.S. what about the contest? Come on...

You are very talented! Okay? And even though we just became friends I trully care about you. Remember that poem I didicated to you? Well, when I did that I meant it. Read every word. I love my friends okay? I really do care about you. All of us do. We wouldn't be here trying to persaude you if we didn't. I'm not telling you not to give up. But if you do you just letting go of a big part of you. You have to take a good look and see what you have. (Talent and great friends) We are all here for you and we CARE about you. So please listen to us...

No please don't give up! You're a wounderfull poet and I'm sure you're a great singer to! Please don't give up! -AsagiTaichou visit my site for a good fanfic

@Shi Bum Bumm:

gud 2 kno........

@bluhart:

It's hard to trust ppl after that, I've learned to keep my secrets to myself. I only talk 2 ppl who've gained my trust after years. I still don't tell them secrets directly tho..

@Shi Bum Bumm:

ya well i once opened up 2 sumone told them evr secret i have and he turned his back on me and told the whole damn school!

@bluhart:

I don't know how you got hurt from talking to ppl, so it's hard trying to avoid making that same mistake.

@Shi Bum Bumm:

tried that and i got hurt more

@bluhart:

Fine, maybe I don't. But what I'm sayn is try talking to ppl still. It may help.

@Shi Bum Bumm:

u dont get it none of u do!

@bluhart:

ur all jus like those othr jerkz!

So those other jerkz care about you like us jerkz?
Now I thought jerkz were those you don't give a damn about anyone and blow ppl off.

I'll stay being the careing jerk I am tho.

@Shi Bum Bumm:

ya but thats wat i thought cuz i thought all of u were diffrnt but ur not ur all jus like those othr jerkz!

@bluhart:

You Don't Know What Any Of Us Have Been Through.

And I'm just figuring out some of what you've been through. We Are Trying To Help. Maybe you don't need a friend. I don't know you well enough to say you do. Maybe you really don't. But I do think you need someone to talk to. Why would you have made so many posts before on your life? why would you have ever bothered talking to ppl here? Maybe coz u want some1 to listen.

@hinatafan379:

i can and i will!

u cant give up!i wont let u!u can say watevr u want but i wont let u give up!

@Shi Bum Bumm:

yes it will............and none of u kno wat ive ben threw so just leave me ALONE!i dont need friends who does?!

im not gune blieve u guys no mattr wat!um giving up!

@bluhart:

Well what do you really want to do?? Giving up isn't doing anything and diein certaintly isn't.

What! give up are you crazy, I'm not very good at giving advice but trust me when I say it do'snt matter what other people think just dont give up!

@bluhart:

i do not think this is a joke! i'm trying to cheer you up!!

@otakufangirl:

no i cant and u think this is a joke?you can fly if u blieve in yourself!

@Shi Bum Bumm:

no they dont if they did they would listen 2 me wen i try 2 talk 2 them and i dont care i shuldve died at 7 that terrible year and age if i did it wuldve ment that my father wuldve ben a murderer!

no! you should never give up! i liked your poems. you can do anything as long as you beleive in yourself (except grow wings and fly XD) talking ab out things will make you feel better. you can express yourself through your poetry!

@bluhart:

ikno i was suposta die but guess wat i dint and im still here!

In my opinion that means you were meant to live. I don't know your parents, so I can't give any sort of advice on it. But take a look at all your comments. You've got a collection of people who seriously care about you and are here for whatever you need. I understand that it hurts when your parents don't understand SO MAKE THEM. That may be difficult but that's obviously somthing that's hurting you! Your parents freak because they DO care and WANT to understand what's going on with you!!

@Shi Bum Bumm:

i dont care!no one understands!my parents freak if i go emo 4 a day!they freak that i a tomboy!they freak bout evryli thing i do!ive faced death so many times b4 and ikno i was suposta die but guess wat i dint and im still here!

Welp, figure your self out and figue out what you really want to do. Lunastarz said it, giving up absolutely won't make you any happier. Writing is a form of venting or speaking about what's bothing you or on your mind. It's a healthy practice no matter what you beleive the quality is.
Giving up ain't the solution. Take time to figure yourself out and do what you gotta do. But don't drop the things that you love or enjoy or need. There are going to be road blocks and many more obstacles for all of us including you, giving up is what gets you stuck and going no where.

[9.tailed]

Well you may not, but still....others do.

~lunastarz~

@lunastarz:

thanx but no thanx i kno this is my first time giving up but it feels like my millionth time and i dont care!

Give up then....but its not going to make you anymore happier. And your friends are still going to be your friends. Im still here, even though we just meet, Im not letting you slip this easily.

~lunastarz~

@lunastarz:

i can and i will!

No you cant! NEVER give up!

It doesnt matter to what people say, as long as your happy with ourself, then thats all that matters. Keep wrighting poerty if only for yourself. And Im sure you are both good at singing and dancing. You cant doubt yourself. Stand up strait and walk tall girl! The people who care are going to support you in everything you want to do, but at times like these, we are going to push you back to doing things you love and teaching you to never give up. If Nasa gave up, will man have ever walked on the moon? Come on friend, Hang in there.

And for what counts. I really like your poems....

~lunastarz~

@bluhart:

Oh...well I'm sorry to be a burden.

@imouto chan:

i dont enjoy it....it hurts me more than it hurts anyone else

What was that on my world then? Don't rip up your sketch book Imouto chan! Don't give up! Hm? What if I went and did that? What if I threw it out the window and told everyone to freak off?! But I won't. If you enjoy doing something don't stop doing just because ppl are mean about it!
Imouto chan~