Wow I love this! actually this IS my first time reading fanfictions so im excited and i hope you add more soon!

im just going to go with u r never gonna update this....

i know i bugged u about this before, but when r u gonna put up chapter 6???? IM SO SORRY FOR BUGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!

this is really awesome!!!! i cant wait for the next chapters!!!!

@hugmeimcute:

AHH I tried! I really did! I crammed a good 3 pages saturday night hoping I would be able to have it done and up today. But being it was valentines day today I hung out with my bf all day, so I wasn't able to get it done I'm so so SOO sorry to be keeping you waiting like this, but I'm working on it now and will possibly [HOPEFULLY]have it done in the next couple days. Again, I'm VERY sorry and thank you so much for your patience! *bows*

@ChibiEdoGirl:

You know you should post up the next chapter as a Valentine's present to all of us who have been waiting so long for this!! PLLLZZZ!!!

@ChibiEdoGirl:

well your certainly taking your time on this...(add sarcastic tone here)......HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ChibiEdoGirl:

HURRY UP!!!!!! I GETTING TIRED OF WAITING!!!!!!!

@Vivene:

thank you very much!

@ChibiEdoGirl:

Yay! The party scene is finally here!!! Party, Party, come and join us!! :)

@ChibiEdoGirl:

Kay thanks and hurrry up!!^^

@hugmeimcute:

lol Ok! If you do end up drawing that I'll definatly have to take a look!

@ChibiEdoGirl:

YAY!!!!!!!! AWWW!! It was so sweet at the end!! Makes me wanna draw a picture of winry leaning on Edward in a bus!! I just might do that!! Okay hurry up with the next chapter!! Can't wait for the pary scene!!

@hugmeimcute:

Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to update! D:
well, here's chapter 4!

@ChibiEdoGirl:

Well you should! Hurry up I've waiting for a week now!!
Your biggest fan Hugme-chan!!

@hugmeimcute:

The fourth page is coming soon. ^^ Yeah I'm thinking about throwing Russle into the mix somehow, but we'll just have to wait and see. lol

@ChibiEdoGirl:

....Im like that too! Wheres the fourth page? I gonna cry!You know since your making winry jelaous you should make ed jelaous too! You should make russel like winry! Oh wait you have roy for that! Aww Im just so much of a RoyXriza fan that I can't see him with winry! (like I would want to see a grown man and a teenage girl together) I don't know! Well it is your story. I wonder why no one has ever thought to make a russelXwinry anything! I wonder how that would work out...Oh well ed is better with winry any way!!

@hugmeimcute:

lol yes I hate Rose so I just had to make Winry hate her. xD Thats just how I am....

@ChibiEdoGirl:

yes... it's a lot more interesting!! I love how you made winry hate rose! rose is a slut that should die alone!! I mean she was pregnant when she met ed!! I think...... Any way finish it now!!! PPPLLLLLEEEAASSSEEEEE!!! that is all.

@fsnLover:

Really? Thank you! I'm very glad you like it

men you sure can make a very very good story i was judt in the second paragraph an i was really amazed

@hugmeimcute:

lol ok ok I will finish it! xD I'm glad you like it that much! Almost as good as Twilight is really good! Are you sure it's that good? lol

FINISH THIS!!!! this is an order!!! this is way to awesome,cute, and funny not to be finished!! plz im begging this is the coolest story ever!! better than twilight!! okay maybe not that good but it sure as hell is close!!!

@wolfee1005:

no problem ^^

@wolfee1005:

Thank you! Oh I love your avatar btw. Fai rocks xD

@Kyubi Elric:

Aww thank you so much! It's people like you who comment who really inspire me to keep writing. Thank you, I'm so glad you like this!

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um well....I guess we can say it's based in our word? I don't realy know, i guess I didn't think that one through...^^"

@cherrichan13:

lol thanks I'm glad you liked it! If you need me to explain anything feel free to ask!

yay! xD I'm surprised it published so fast!

@Haxelo:

Aw thanks so much! I'll be sure to continue it! *hugs* TAHNK YOU!