Wow, this is really good, Aree-chan. I think it's got a lot more potential if you put some more thought into it. It's got a really good message hidden in it. Keep up the amazing poem writing, friend. *hugs*

~Razi-chan

Wonderful symbol for life! The poem is natural and gentle, very well done, Sumera.

@fileeia28:

Well its an honor that u like my poems,well i just try it with free mode~

Anyway thank u so much for so kind and nice comment~

~May God Bless Ya~

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Thank u so much dear Sis~

heya there, i love ur poems, they are flowing with great emotion and u have a special way of expressing them...beautiful.

just remember that your life is precious, my friend. :)

take care now :)