@phantomgirl21:

My fave is Alexa. She's spunky and doesn't take anyones crap but she also has a soft and loving side lol i'm glad you like it

@vmpgrl:

@VMPGRL I'VE WRITTEN SOME MORE FOR YOU TO READ. HOPE YOU ENJOY. I'M STILL READING YOUR STORY. I'M IN LOVE WITH EMMA SO FAR!!

VAMPY PHANTOM

OKAY THEN DRAW FAZIL IF YOU MUST! AND I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S THAT SAD. YOU ARE A MESS MY FRIEND A MESS!!! GLAD YOU READ IT THOUGH. TTYL.

real bb-chan this time:

i wanna draw fazil so bad it hurts.

like, omg, this is like so sad, yknow? like, it's bringing tears to my eyes, yknow? like, omg?
like, is that a piccy of one of the prettiest boys ever?

thanks so much and yeah i know I'm re reading it now and fixing some of them now!!!! typing fast will be the death of me! But I'm going to keep going because you like it! THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR READING IT! I should have more up soon.

@phantomgirl21:

I loved this!!!!! I couldn't stop reading until the end. I don't care if there's mistakes in it its totally awesome! Great job!!!!!

thanks again for reading my story and giving me advice about it. I just wanted to know if you've gotten a chance to read more? I've changed it quite a bit but this version might be a little more to your liking. Again thanks and take care.

Looks good so far. :3 There are some mistakes but that is to be expected of an early draft.

The second one from Casee's point of view seems a little more rushed than the first from Fazil's PoV. More mistakes in that one. It doesn't flow as well but its still good.

Your certainly off to a good start though! Keep at it!