The essence of time is really portrayed in this poem =)
Good job hunni

They say time is life's best teacher, but it kills all its students. It was yet another lovely poem ^^

@The Shadow Prince:

your welcome lol i enyoyed reading it lol[i was like woah thats so true]

@red kie:

thank you my dear

@Rageon:

well that was the effect i was going for
thanks

I think this is really good. I especially like the way that, as you initially describe time as a circle, your thoughts about time also seem to be traveling in a circle. Very nice.

i get this alot
i can relate to this ...it kinds goes with what iv been feeling
i know we all want to master time at some point inour lifes!!!
good poem !!!