@bluhart:

That's a good idea. :) And if he doesn't even appreciate that, then maybe he's not worth it.

@Afterglow:

well like its his friends and how me n him argued about what went down, but i think ima at least try to have a casual convo with him

@bluhart:

What's stopping you?

@Afterglow:

nah th eonly problem is whether i should try to talk to him again or not

@bluhart:

Ah, really? I'm sorry. I hope that's not too hard on you right now. :(

@Afterglow:

ha im kinda in one of those complicated situations right now

@bluhart:

Mhm. It's something like that. Actually, the girl thinks the boy is really amazing and she feels like he deserves something better than her. She believes he's like royalty, like an angel, someone totally unreal. But the boy really just wants her to see him for who he is. He just wants their relationship to be normal.
(And this is actually based on a true scenario that happened a month or so ago.. it's complicated, but those words really struck me. Haha.)

I'm glad you like the poem and the rhyming! n_n I tried to make it suttle because I know what you mean; rhyming sometimes does just end up turning silly.

Thanks for all your support. ;)

i love it!!!it kinda seems like...hmm...well...like someone is completely moved by someone else, but doesnt want to see that whomever it is is also simply human and great job with the rhyming! its hard to not make something sound cheesy with rhyming