@imouto chan:

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you like my similes. n_n

Absolutely lovely~ I love how you compared a heart to a glass of water, and the stanza about one being a diamond, the other a pearl, is my favorite part. c:

@bluhart:

That's why you need to show them something new. ;)

@Afterglow:

possibly...but people in my school are too narrow minded

@bluhart:

Awh, that should just encourage you more to put your work into that book! You could make a huge statement by being different. I'm also sure the people who make the book are interested in something with a different focus. ;)

@Afterglow:

thats cool yea i was guna put in some poetry for our school "chat book" but everyone elses poems were so happy n mine were like all dark

@bluhart:

Haha. x3 Thanks~ I do write things for my school's poetry and art magazine, so that's a start. >.>
(I'm also a girl.. I dunno if you were just saying bro as a slang term, but just in case. Hehe.)

no problem bro!!ppl need to see this kind of genuis!!

@bluhart:

Awh, oh gosh. You're too kind. ^///^
But I'm very glad you like it! That really means a lot. :)

this is so beautiful! its so hard to come by a good non-cheesy love-ish poem!!! your a freaking god for doing so!!