The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/28/09 | Reply
I cried on this one. You did a very good job on showing all the emotions, and the last phrase hit me like a hammer. It's only after that phrase when I realize the car was heading for her. Very potent story.
cherrichan13
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/28/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
Thanks, Karmira!
This is my favorite of my original stories, I think. This and "Give It Back? Never."
Haha. That's most of the ones I have posted.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/28/09 | Reply
I cried on this one. You did a very good job on showing all the emotions, and the last phrase hit me like a hammer. It's only after that phrase when I realize the car was heading for her. Very potent story.