aww, Beckles. That sucks I'm sorry. I haven't read the particular thing you're talking about but I enjoy fleshing out character and enhancing relationships between them, both as a reader and a writer. Whatever that woman says, you're a terrific talent and don't get discouraged. Usually my favorite parts of the stories are the calm between the firestorms. It builds the intensity and makes you care about the characters so that the events that happen to them matter to the reader. It's the difference between, "Oh, there was an earthquake," and, "Holy Crap! Ernest was swallowed by the Earth during during the quake!"
I hope that guy helps you *huggles becksy*. Remember there's always some other readers who enjoy your stories so don't let one person discourage you. ;3
I hope you felt at least a little better after that.
But yeahhhh, I absolutely can't fault your feelings for any of this. I imagine I'd be pretty damn frustrated too. Heh, you should critique her thing saying she doesn't talk enough or something . . .
moletta
Firestarter (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/08 | Reply
aww, Beckles. That sucks I'm sorry. I haven't read the particular thing you're talking about but I enjoy fleshing out character and enhancing relationships between them, both as a reader and a writer. Whatever that woman says, you're a terrific talent and don't get discouraged. Usually my favorite parts of the stories are the calm between the firestorms. It builds the intensity and makes you care about the characters so that the events that happen to them matter to the reader. It's the difference between, "Oh, there was an earthquake," and, "Holy Crap! Ernest was swallowed by the Earth during during the quake!"
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/25/08 | Reply
Some people are so stupid.
I hope that guy helps you *huggles becksy*. Remember there's always some other readers who enjoy your stories so don't let one person discourage you. ;3
The crazy bubbly shadow
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 05/25/08 | Reply
I hope you felt at least a little better after that.
But yeahhhh, I absolutely can't fault your feelings for any of this. I imagine I'd be pretty damn frustrated too. Heh, you should critique her thing saying she doesn't talk enough or something . . .
But yeah. Tomorrow.
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/08 | Reply
Wow... I hope you get the right kind of advice/encouragement you need to help your writing o_O
Don't let one person (or even a few) discourage you as long as it's something you really want to do ^^
Bazinga!