@Wakusei Aoshi:

Aw, thank you! ;u; I really try to sing louder, but I just can't unless I'm goofing off with my family... xD;;; I don't know why. I wish I could sing louder. When I try, my voice gets really out of tune and nasally and horrible.

Woooow, powerful! 8D That's fun, though. xD

I'm still honored you drew it! ;0;

Joo have a very nice voice! If only it were louder! ;3; My friend has the same sorta trouble with singing. She's amazing, but she's afraid to sing louder, which I know she can do.

For me, mehahaha, I usually sing when my parents aren't home and then I sing so loud the house echoes....but I can't really help it when I'm singing loud songs, too...>3> But the bottom line is just be as loud as ya want! :D

Aww, I's honoured you used meh pic...;3;

@moonlit dream:

Haha, COULD BE... that line is also my favorite.
And you're welcome, SISMANCIA!!! :D

@Afterglow:

Mmm. Pure poetry. I adore the use of "inside of me" versus "outside of me" simply for the purpose of sounding cool. My favorite line has to be "WHINE WHINE. WHINE WHINE WHINE."

Haha, THAT COULD BE SOMEDAY... and thanks again. xD GLAD YOU THINK SO, MY SISMANCE.

@moonlit dream:

Nah, I don't think it's angsty. Angsty is like:

And these wounds inside my heart come creeping up inside of me
these tears inside my skull come creeping up outside of me
this lock inside my soul it locks myself inside of me
this finger on the gun it breaks me from outside of me
WHINE WHINE
WHINE WHINE WHINE

Real lyrics to a real song. Just kidding. No, but yours seem put together very nicely with imagery and stuff. Haha.

@Afterglow:

THANKS....! I'm really glad you like them. I'm always afraid of coming off like "DRAMA DRAMA! OOOH, DEPRESSING DRAMA ANGST!"
xD Why? It rhymes! I actually sang that part in the video.

And thanks again. ;u; That part you bolded is probably my favorite line, because the rhythm works out really nice.

THE LYRICS ARE SO GOOD!!!!!
This one is hilarious:
I know you think you're so obdurate;
...
I know you think I'm so insubordinate,

Hahahaha, best rhyming skills.

This part is beautiful (not sarcasm):

....Because
Who cares what the higher ups will say?
...
What's wrong with a little direction?
...
Waiting with my ear against the door.
And I'll think, "Finally! It's clicked inside her head."
But there's still bottles hanging 'round your bed. (<< ESPECIALLY THIS. Tim's mom, eh?)

Even when the solid glass stabs
The mess of tumbling feathers down your back,
Spread them out and cut the slack.
They've turned to threads, turned to threads, turned to threads.

@Afterglow:

NICE! Actually, kind of impressive. :D
I put it in the post, now. :V

@moonlit dream:

ALL.
OFF.
THE.
LYR.
ICS.
PLE.
ASE.
:DD

*totally used off instead of of to get the 3-letter thing down.

@:

xD Just being silly...
Thanks!! C: I'll finish it one day. xD
(And thanks in advance...! ;u;)

@Hifsa:

Aw, thank you! :D

Well happy Birthday in advance :D And yeah the song is really cool :)

@Afterglow:

All of the lyrics, or just the part I sang? :o
Aha, thanks! And nah, I just sing really quiet when I'm not goofing off and the house is empty... for some reason. .3.;;

Can you post the lyrics? It's quiet, but I'm sure that's the point. You sound so nice, though!! :'D I like that you added a harmony too.