I'll post it when I finish the 3rd chapter. ;3;
Right now it's 6 pages long.
Which somehow equates to 2 chapters. (WAH, SO SHORT.) The first chapter's only 2 pages long. ;A;A;A;A;
Hopefully they'll be longer in the future.
Maybe.
Idk.
I type too much. >:I
Woah nelly, it's okay to get off topic. :M
I think it's hilarious that there's a rapper named Nelly.
AAAAH, I TOTALLY GET THAT "I" THING!!!
But what really gets me is when I start writing in the passive voice. xD;;;; (I BLAME MY ENGLISH TEACHER FOR MAKING ME PARANOID ABOUT IT.)
It's when you use linking verbs excessively or something, which are IS
AM
ARE
WAS and WERE.
Or so my English teacher tells me.
Oh I know how you feel girlfrand. Everytime I try to write something, my inner critic is screaming,
"NO! YOU ARE USING WAY TO MANY PRONOUNS! STOP STARTING THE SENTENCE WITH I, IT'S NOT ALL ABOUT YOU! THAT SOUNDS WEIRD. THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE. SHE'S A MARY SUE. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WHY CAN'T YOU WRITE?!" It's quite viscous, really.
OH, OH! I WANNA READ THIIIS~ Whenever you decide to post, I'll read right away~ ;D I'm actually planning on making a slight prequel/side-story comic to TGL(after chapter 5 or 6 I think) with Anri and Rafael as the main characters~
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/24/11 | Reply
@moonlit dream:
Haha~ my teacher totally talked about that with us but it completely slips my mind as to what it is xD
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/23/11 | Reply
@:
I don't mind reading, but I never find anything interesting to read. -3-
Thaaanks. :>
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/23/11 | Reply
@imouto chan:
I'll post it when I finish the 3rd chapter. ;3;
Right now it's 6 pages long.
Which somehow equates to 2 chapters. (WAH, SO SHORT.) The first chapter's only 2 pages long. ;A;A;A;A;
Hopefully they'll be longer in the future.
Maybe.
Idk.
I type too much. >:I
Woah nelly, it's okay to get off topic. :M
I think it's hilarious that there's a rapper named Nelly.
Never.
Except sometimes.
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/23/11 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
AAAAH, I TOTALLY GET THAT "I" THING!!!
But what really gets me is when I start writing in the passive voice. xD;;;; (I BLAME MY ENGLISH TEACHER FOR MAKING ME PARANOID ABOUT IT.)
It's when you use linking verbs excessively or something, which are
IS
AM
ARE
WAS and
WERE.
Or so my English teacher tells me.
This comment looks long, but it's really not. xD
imouto chan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/23/11 | Reply
I- I want to read a story by you. When you're ready of course.
LOL hoahaohoa. Best thing ever. Reminds me of how sometimes my mom calls chihuahuas CHEE WHO AH WHO AH's. Whoa Nelly, off topic.
Posts can never be lame. Never.
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/22/11 | Reply
@moonlit dream:
Oh I know how you feel girlfrand. Everytime I try to write something, my inner critic is screaming,
"NO! YOU ARE USING WAY TO MANY PRONOUNS! STOP STARTING THE SENTENCE WITH I, IT'S NOT ALL ABOUT YOU! THAT SOUNDS WEIRD. THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE. SHE'S A MARY SUE. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WHY CAN'T YOU WRITE?!" It's quite viscous, really.
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/22/11 | Reply
@icefoxchan:
MAYBE SOME DAY...
Cooool. :D I'll read yours right away when you decide to post it~
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/22/11 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
B-B-B-BUT...
.........
It's really weird-sounding because writing is hard. D:
icefoxchan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/22/11 | Reply
OH, OH! I WANNA READ THIIIS~ Whenever you decide to post, I'll read right away~ ;D
I'm actually planning on making a slight prequel/side-story comic to TGL(after chapter 5 or 6 I think) with Anri and Rafael as the main characters~
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/22/11 | Reply
Yay story time yay!
*sits down and crosses her legs and looks up at you expectantly*