THANK YOU!! i didn't really know if it was good and i got nervous when you didn't comment and,well,yeah....
But thank you,and i think it would be great if you continued!! you write soooooooooo well!!
sorry my internet was down and we just got it fixed.
I think u did magnificently!! i enjoyed reading it!! i think you got them down well. especially Houyou! i really enjoyed the part where he broke the goblet and then licked his wounds! that was like right on! and Hiroki was so cute!!! also i like how you made him The Shadow! it put a twist in the story, which we needed, cause i havent been able to think of any plot yet.
P.S. do u want me to do the next ch? or would you like to continue?
Eiri Yuki s Lover
YukiFangirlSupreme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/05/09 | Reply
@VampireBat12:
ok ill get to work on the next chapter then! and i think u write well too!!
VampireBat12
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/05/09 | Reply
@Eiri Yuki s Lover:
THANK YOU!! i didn't really know if it was good and i got nervous when you didn't comment and,well,yeah....
But thank you,and i think it would be great if you continued!! you write soooooooooo well!!
Eiri Yuki s Lover
YukiFangirlSupreme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/05/09 | Reply
@VampireBat12:
sorry my internet was down and we just got it fixed.
I think u did magnificently!! i enjoyed reading it!! i think you got them down well. especially Houyou! i really enjoyed the part where he broke the goblet and then licked his wounds! that was like right on! and Hiroki was so cute!!! also i like how you made him The Shadow! it put a twist in the story, which we needed, cause i havent been able to think of any plot yet.
P.S. do u want me to do the next ch? or would you like to continue?
VampireBat12
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/03/09 | Reply
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
