@Sakaira:

oh :P its fine

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oh, i really need to read things twice. lol i mess a lot of details. but I just woke up when i read it so yeah XD

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thank yuew very much!! did it make you wonder? if so what part?

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@Sakaira:

gewd i wanted it to make the reader wonder!! :] i guess i achieved. no it was cloud screaming about zacks death. cloud found zack dead. and the story is told from ayumis perspective shes zackies gf :3

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I liked it. It was suspenseful making me wonder. I actually thought it'd be Zack but I was wrong XD