*applauds* Very very nice. A lot of tension and action yet you're making it very clear to understand what's happening. A very intense battle but very detailed as well. Superb work, Lady Karmira. *smiles*
OMG...this was so epic...epic is a poor word of describing it. :| I loved it...so good. And you have the characters down to a T. Even down to Kurama's intricate planning tactics. This is no 10 my friend...it's a 100. I look forward to seeing this YYH fanfic in the works....
Weaver of Dreams (Otaku Angel) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Yay, I'm glad you were able to make the deadline! This was an intricate fight, both Hiei and Kurama have been training as you have them showing off more moves with deeper thought. And there was a reason and plan in what was going on (I think the convo after the fact help explain that X3 that was cool)
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Sleeping Dragon (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/10 | Reply
@Karmira:
I'm sure it will. Not worried in the slightest *hugs*
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/10 | Reply
@Gin Ichimaru:
Thank you very much, Gin. I'm glad I succeeded portraying the tension and pace with the details.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/10 | Reply
@Support KIRA:
Heh. I'm glad you really liked that part. It was fun to write.
I hope the longer fan fiction lives up to your epic expectations.
Gin Ichimaru
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/08/10 | Reply
*applauds* Very very nice. A lot of tension and action yet you're making it very clear to understand what's happening. A very intense battle but very detailed as well. Superb work, Lady Karmira. *smiles*
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Sleeping Dragon (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/10 | Reply
“Ironic. I am on fire.” --LOL!! Too funny! XD
OMG...this was so epic...epic is a poor word of describing it. :| I loved it...so good. And you have the characters down to a T. Even down to Kurama's intricate planning tactics. This is no 10 my friend...it's a 100. I look forward to seeing this YYH fanfic in the works....
*standing ovation*
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
@tiggerola:
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope it helps you in your writing.
tiggerola
Weaver of Dreams (Otaku Angel) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Yay, I'm glad you were able to make the deadline! This was an intricate fight, both Hiei and Kurama have been training as you have them showing off more moves with deeper thought. And there was a reason and plan in what was going on (I think the convo after the fact help explain that X3 that was cool)