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    tavis harts

    Senior Otaku | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply

    Wow. Thats both and amazing and a deep poem.
    I can understand why you wouldn't read it tho. Theres a lot of emotion tied up in it so it would be hard to read it aloud especially to a crowd.

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    Black Kiss

    Grand Otaku | Posted 11/02/10 | Reply

    Thats great!
    Its really,really good.

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    SaxGirl

    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/10 | Reply

    Wow. You've captured your feelings so well! I can honestly feel a bit of them through the poem. Man, I never knew you were so good at writing poetry...:3
    I should also say though, I never let people read my poems either - before I started posting them on theO - and definitely not people close to meX3 Most of my poetry is hidden in a notebook somewhere in a drawer...

    Take care! *hugs*
    ~S.G~

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    Kakashisgf

    Otaku Legend | Posted 11/02/10 | Reply

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    Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it!