OMG. So. Much. Awesome!
Lolz definatly continue, i want to find out who the guy with the cape is!!!!!
Ummm, my bit of advice is to add in more actions while she's talking, and more info on her tone, gestures and expressions.
That's about all i can think of, i can't wait to read your next chapter.
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Otaku Legend | Posted 11/26/09 | Reply
@VWBSZWAS:
Thanks ^^ I appreciate it!
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Otaku Legend | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
OMG. So. Much. Awesome!
Lolz definatly continue, i want to find out who the guy with the cape is!!!!!
Ummm, my bit of advice is to add in more actions while she's talking, and more info on her tone, gestures and expressions.
That's about all i can think of, i can't wait to read your next chapter.