@VWBSZWAS:

only when she's fighting or killing! and why don't we have this argument at school?

@EoAA:

It so is not, everything you've written on her gives her a totaly different personality.

@VWBSZWAS:

only if you go by how she is when she is on a job, if you look at how she acts before that and after that, it is similar.

@EoAA:

Nope i still think she changed too much.

@VWBSZWAS:

it's not totally different... she's only like that on jobs, when shes killing!

@EoAA:

A paragraph isn't enough if your going to turn someones personality tottaly different.

@:

i love cliffhangers too, but not when the next book isn't already out. Cos' then i have to wait. I don't like waiting...

@VWBSZWAS:

i did give an explantion it was kinda hidden in there-Victoria changed her because she couldn't go on jobs and stuff and she felt responsible ect. I gave a whole paragraph on it

@:

Maria thinks that Kitty killed her parents

Great.
The only problem i have is that her character seemed to change dramaticaly, from the last chapter to this one, without much explanation.
Other that that it's good

@:

thanks, cliffhangers give the other person something to work on and alawys keeps the readers wanting to keep reading to find out what happens ^_^ Oops 0__o i didn't notice the "told" thing 0__o

@:

*hugs back* Okay can't waitto see Maria's reaction ^_^