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shes gonna change Kitty a little, you'll see shes already starting to change her in chpt 3

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Kitty is gonna teach her ^_^

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that sounds interesting

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thankies DN!

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yeah your right. maybe Kitty is from a bloodline that they can turn with a single bite. and yeah we do get to see a softr side to her ^_^

Good;
Yay we get to see the softer side of kitty ^-^
and another character has been brought in.
Improvement;
When you add in a major thing (like turning) you should probably put more info behind it so the readers know what's going on.

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To both of you.
Good but i was thinking that turning should have to involve some sort of blood exchange *wince* i just think it seems more logical that way other wise the number of vamps would grown exponentiation until there are more vamps than humans (damn my stupid maths class) i don't know what you guys think, but even if we just made it that the girl fought back, and managed to bite Kitty, or maybe Kitty scratched herself and accidentally dripped some blood on the girls lips, or maybe only one (or two) blood lines can turn with a single bite. I think there has to be some restrictions or maths would win out. Personally I think the bloodlines idea would be the easiest to manipulate.
What do you guys think?

*sigh* We really need to come together and decide all this in one go so we can all work together.
I know i'll write up what we've decided so far and post it, then we can discuss anything else in the comments box ^-^

Sorry about this