Yeah, not my best story. I'll admit. thats why i never published it though wrote it three years ago, but since been ages since i wrote something, i decided to post it till i can find time to write. And as you can see, I suck at proofreading. Anyway thanks for reading.
It's a cute story. It could be proofread a bit.
My only problem with it is when Kagome called Inuyasha a halfbreed. I don't believe that even on Kagome's darkest day, when Inuyasha pisses her off the most would she ever call him that. Kagome loves him despite him being part demon. She doesn't see it as a fault, as something to be ashamed of.
DemonsandAngels
Beautiful Disaster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/12 | Reply
@frfry:
No worries.
I was hoping to an editor for my career, so that's why I mentioned it. :)
frfry
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/12 | Reply
@DemonsandAngels:
Yeah, not my best story. I'll admit. thats why i never published it though wrote it three years ago, but since been ages since i wrote something, i decided to post it till i can find time to write. And as you can see, I suck at proofreading. Anyway thanks for reading.
DemonsandAngels
Beautiful Disaster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/12 | Reply
It's a cute story. It could be proofread a bit.
My only problem with it is when Kagome called Inuyasha a halfbreed. I don't believe that even on Kagome's darkest day, when Inuyasha pisses her off the most would she ever call him that. Kagome loves him despite him being part demon. She doesn't see it as a fault, as something to be ashamed of.