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Scar

a short poem i wrote,Nothing special,please tell me what you think!
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A scar a scar,i see a shooting star,

i wish for a cure i wish for a chance,

i wish that to my face people would glance,

A burn spreads through my repulsing face,

disfigured and useless like a broken vase,

An injury of injustice an injury of hate

An injury caused by greed and ambitious debate

I pray i pray,every night and day,

Oh take me lord,oh take me away

Bring an end to my misery and dismay

I liked her i liked her lots

but how can she like a face so grotesque

How can she like someone so horribly unique

I bulked up my courage and went in a hurry

i covered my face with a mask and planned my ultimate task

I brought her flowers and we talked for hours,

a miracle it was she accepted my personality

"that mask of yours is something of originality"

She hints,and tips, for me to remove my disguise

but how can i even look her in the eyes?

My face is wretched,my smile is crooked

But she did accept my psyche

my hands shake with disbelief

I remove the mask and pull the curtains

she stutters for a moment,of her reaction i am uncertain

She puts a hand on my face,I'm surprised and confused at the case

She says she fell in love with me,but how can she love a mutilated carcass?!

I ask her for a mirror and as i look at the reflection,i am filled with misconception

My face is refined,my face is cured,after everything I've endured

I jump in joy and let out a cheerful laughter,

"My wish came true! my wish came true!"

"my torn up face came back anew!"

"thank you god,you gave me a chance"

"i am so happy i think i'm gonna dance!"

*input harlem shake sequence here*

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