@Kaerlyn:

Ha, ah well. It made sense to me in my mind. ._.

Aww.. who are you going to miss?

@Britty Nature:

I knew what you meant, sorry i meant that you used the word sincere, and it should be sincerity, but of course that wrecks the rhyme...

I did like it though ^_^ although i'm sorry if you do feel that way... I hate missing people... and in a week i'm going to be missing someone waaay too much... *sighs*

@Kaerlyn:

I meant it like my fears were taking over with sincerity. Like... yeah. I don't know how to explain it. ._.

Aww i do like it, even if it is a little gloomy. The line 'All my fears, they start to take over with complete sincere' doesn't make sense though, i don't think you can use the word sincere like that... But I see your meaning and things, so overall I think it is good.

I like the idea for this world, good luck with your story ^_^

*hugs* I hope you can be with the one you miss...