Yeah you did a great job (and that's saying something from me cause I don't like love stories lol) ,though I've never heard of that coupling before.I agree with shinigami shadow,it was very descriptive! You should do a Naruto and Gaara coupling next! Lol just joking.
that, was quite intresting, your a better writer than ill ever be ill admit to that. Its quit long as well, took me awhile to read but all in all i did read it ^smirks^ got a laugh or two out of it as well
kudos it was a good story
fanfic. i hope ^smiles akwardly^
ill wait around to see what other stories you come up with
shinigami117
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/25/09 | Reply
Yeah you did a great job (and that's saying something from me cause I don't like love stories
lol) ,though I've never heard of that coupling before.I agree with shinigami shadow,it was very descriptive! You should do a Naruto and Gaara coupling next! Lol just joking.
lover of the sand
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/09/08 | Reply
that, was quite intresting, your a better writer than ill ever be ill admit to that. Its quit long as well, took me awhile to read but all in all i did read it ^smirks^ got a laugh or two out of it as well
kudos it was a good story
fanfic. i hope ^smiles akwardly^
ill wait around to see what other stories you come up with
DragonStorm
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/28/08 | Reply
@mewmewpudding:
Lol, it really does sound like something she would do.
Thank you so much for the positive comments though. I really appreciate it~
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/27/08 | Reply
Never really thought of this coupling before, but that's what good fanfiction writers are for, aren't they? ;]
I loved how Temari was partially behind it. It seemed too much like her! *laughs*
Gaarabeachbum
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/26/08 | Reply
..........ok, CONTINUE THIS ONE PLEEEEEEEEASE!! I BEG OF U!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!!! thank u!! ^.^
DragonStorm
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/23/08 | Reply
@shinigami shadow:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed/ And thank you so much for reading the fic~
shinigami shadow
Otakuite | Posted 05/22/08 | Reply
really good job, very descriptive. it was almost as if i caould feel the winds and the sand in the story. great job!