Snaaaaaake! XD Time to deal with Mr. Creepy! To think that he was hiding as the assistant all this time... o_o Provided we're right about it really being him. ^^ I can't wait to find out!
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/07/10 | Reply
I like how you take some of the conversation and make it more into thoughts instead of being verbally said. Like when Elathan got angry there at the end. Fits the situation better than just plain talking.
Oh and I agree with Beth, the title is very amusing. Made me chuckle.
The title to this so made me laugh. XD I do love how things are really getting interesting now. <3 Only thing Gaylia is unhappy with is she couldn't pester Rel with more questions. BUT, being an elf she's patient enough to wait... barley. lolz
Selene Shri
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/07/10 | Reply
Snaaaaaake! XD Time to deal with Mr. Creepy! To think that he was hiding as the assistant all this time... o_o Provided we're right about it really being him. ^^ I can't wait to find out!
~Sarah
Indi
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/07/10 | Reply
I like how you take some of the conversation and make it more into thoughts instead of being verbally said. Like when Elathan got angry there at the end. Fits the situation better than just plain talking.
Oh and I agree with Beth, the title is very amusing. Made me chuckle.
~Crystia
SunfallE
Nyaa~ (ZE MEANIE) | Posted 10/07/10 | Reply
The title to this so made me laugh. XD I do love how things are really getting interesting now. <3 Only thing Gaylia is unhappy with is she couldn't pester Rel with more questions. BUT, being an elf she's patient enough to wait... barley. lolz
In the name of the tune I will punish you!