TheO Discovery Channel

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This world is under trial. It might continue or it might be deleted depending on the feedback.

Konnichiwa mina-san*bows*.

Welcome to TheO Discovery Channel.

The PURPOSE of this world is:

-to promote some under rated talents here on theO
I’ve noticed that there are very talented members out there that deserve more attention and of course more subscribers.

How it works:
-I’ll will identify the members and send pm to ask whether they are interested to get themselves promoted here.

OR
-you can send a pm or comment stating the name of the member that you think should be on here

OR
If you can request for yourself to be featured here.

Terms and Conditions:

-Member to be promoted here should have at least 5 works submitted (works include all categories, ecard, wallpaper, art, fan word, comic)
-Have less than 60 subscribers
-If you do not meet the 2 conditions above but still want to be featured, you can also send a pm.
-I have the right to accept or decline any request based on the quality of the works and also for any other reason.
-I won’t guarantee that you’ll get more subs/hugs/fav after you get yourself promoted here
-Do notify me if you found the members that are featured here are actually art thieves.

Just a bit info: This world was known as Discover the World, where we did review on the worlds here. You can check them out as I won’t remove them although the theme has change. Special thanks to the guest panels who had done the reviews on here.

Created By aoi bara

Savior - saekimidori

World's name: Savior
Creator: saekimidori
Date created: 26/07/09
Type/category: Original fiction /original anime and manga
Members /guest poster so far: N/A
Description (as by the creator): In a modern, under control city, teenagers reside peacefully... Until a crisis hits their homeland, and everyone is required to fight...

Review by aoi:

A great fiction! Saekimidori's writing style that contains mostly of dialogues/ conversations enable the readers to actually visualize the scene. Besides a good story line, one of the most interesting feature of this world is the link to the original site of Savior. If you happen to read the story, don't forget to check out the original site as it contains lots more info of Savior. Nice artworks also available there. Also one more interesting feature is the usage of spoiler text in the story to differentiate certain scenes.

So if you are a fan of teenage fiction/fantasy, you really should check out Savior. Really worth it. 4.5 stars!

Review by beloved blood:

The background works well, and you can read the words. I really like the bg, btw, it's cute. Very nice touch to put the picture with the descripton of the story and the site url on it, as well as some official artwork!!! I think the overall world design is very cute. The story is okay. I think there should be a more... er, 'clarification' of the movements of the characters and more details about the main characters like Miyuki and Ciel (cute names, btw). What I mean by 'clarification of the movements' are, for example: 'The girl gave no response. The man walked towards his desk and grabbed a textbook. The few students in the room stared with wide eyes. Suddenly, a loud bang was heard. The girl at the back of the room shot up from her chair and looked around the room.' I was a little confused when I read that part, because you didn't say where the bang came from.

I would recommend this story to any one who likes shoujo, really! Or, if you like fantasy. I shall read the rest! I give you, a 4.8 out of 5!

Overall stars: 4.7 out of 5 (excellent!)
What we say: fiction/fantasy fans, read this one. it's a must!
Link to the world: click HERE

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