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    Otakuite | Posted 04/15/10 | Reply

    A very good depiction of the atmosphere. I actually didn't know u can do things like these, I will try to write my own.

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply

    HOT DAMN!!! This fic is one of the BEST!!!!

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    Otakuite+ | Posted 10/13/08 | Reply

    hmmmmmm i dont know if i like the last words spoken... seems kind of formal when these men seemed to be friendly. usually opponents in battle dont speak this way. idk maybe im wrong. it is good though. nice vivid imagery.