@SandLover13:

lol I'm glad you liked it ^^

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

O_O Oh my god, you are like a master of Haikus or something...^^

@SandLover13:

All right ^^. It's kinda gothic but yeah...

Stars within the night
Shadows fall onto the sky
Silent death seals all

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Okay, you can make any haiku you want. Remember 5, 7, then 5

@SandLover13:

*nods* yes please ^^

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

You do? Want to make one to prove it?

@SandLover13:

^^ I remember Haikus

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Yup, next is haikus :D

@SandLover13:

^^ thanks Jess

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

*claps* Not bad! You did good^^

@SandLover13:

All right let me think...

Dog
Kind, careful
Loving, calming, caring
Golden-hearted girl
Malady

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Just show me what you learned. How about creating a cinquian for Malady?

@SandLover13:

Not sure if I really get it or not ^^'

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Not sure about what?

@SandLover13:

I think I get everything, but I'm not sure now

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

What don't you get?

@SandLover13:

._. I think anyway

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

._. You do? Really?

@SandLover13:

Oh... I get it!

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Cinquians are easy poems.^^ They are supposed to be shaped like diamonds

The first line you put one noun that is the topic of what you are talking about. (In this case, I used Ghost so people can guess)

Second line, you put 2 words that describe the noun (For this case, I used the words "Sadist" and "crazy" to describe the ghost I am talking about)

Third line: You put three action verbs (ending in -ing) that dscribes what the noun does ("Crying", "Dying", and "Trying" is what the ghost does)

4th line: You write a phrase or sentence about the noun ("Girl with a forbidden Love" explains that the ghost is dating someone unusual, in this case Louie the Bat)

5th and final line: You put only one noun that is similar to the word in the 1st line ("Ria" is the "Ghost" I'm talking about, get it?)

@SandLover13:

please explain ^^'

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Let's start with a cinquian poem. I'll do one example and then if you want me explain, I will:

ghost

sadist, crazy

crying, dying, trying

Girl with a Forbidden Love

Ria

@SandLover13:

Hysterical, a little mental, sadstic, depressed... that good?

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Please describe Ria for me?^^

@SandLover13:

... I'd say Ria

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

*thinks* Either Ria or Deiara?

@SandLover13:

hm... I dunno... which would be good for raw emotion?

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

So which OC do you want to write about?

@SandLover13:

All right ^^

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

I could be any topic you want... How about writing a poem about one of your OCs?

@SandLover13:

i dunno... what would be a good start for one?

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

First off, what do you want to write about?

@SandLover13:

That'd be good ^^

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Well, all poems don't have to rhyme you know... and I can help you make a poem...

@SandLover13:

How to rhyme more or less or make the poem come together

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

What don't you get?

@SandLover13:

I have but it helps more... I don't think I get

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

You never learned poetry in school?

@SandLover13:

No it's fine ^^ you're helping me learn

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Oh I'm sorry. I was being a teacher, wasn't I? I really need to not be so long with information....

@SandLover13:

No I actually read it >>' I just don't know how else to reply to make it look like I'm paying attention XD

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Are you just saying "I see" all the time?

@SandLover13:

*nods* I see

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Yup. Mainly, it's Michael's thoughts about what our planet is. Like most of us think that the earth is just some rock floating in space about to explode in millions of years. In Michael's view, he loves the earth and thinks of it as something extraordinary. Like that...

@SandLover13:

Oh... I see

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

Okay... We are going to analyze a poem^^ (Wow, I sound like my 8th grade English teacher XD). Lucky for us, it was mentioned that Michael had trouble with grammer, spelling, but he did like books and poetry, so that might help you ease down a bit. Because of this fact, this poem "Planet Earth" is a simple rhyming poem following this pattern:

A
A
B
B
B
B
C
C

D
D
D
D
E
E
F
F

G
G
H
H
I
I

J
J
K
K

L
L

B
B
B
B
C
C

D
D
D
D
E
E
F
F

M
M

@SandLover13:

It'd honestly help me more ^^'

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

It's okay. If you listen to it on YouTube, his voice when he says it, he puts real emotions in it... Maybe I can teach you more of poetry...

@SandLover13:

I don't really know much about poems so I dunno honestly ^^'

W00p!!! Sounds like you had an awsometotalflipinfaniastical day!

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

What do you think about it?

@SandLover13:

Yeah I have

@DeidaraNarutoClan:

You listened to Michael's poem "Planet Earth" yet?

@SandLover13:

We got the two disc ^^ and glad to know, all right I'll check them out

Wow, suddenly I like your dad!^^ That's great. Did you get the two disc one or the one disc This Is It CD which cost less? That's great. At school in English, I watched a Twilight Zone episode called the Living Doll. It might be on my Plot Terms test though. Glad to know you had a great day today. I continued UNFT, made a new OC, and I don't feel stressed. Well I hope you have a nice day and have fun at Girl Scouts today!^^

^^' I'll also have to go to girlscouts today...