Amazing, a story about Rin! That's something you don't see everyday, LOL. It's funny, I ran into it randomly.
I really liked reading it, to imagine how would be her life as an adult. Your story is somewhat dark and sad, but I guess Rin would never fit into a human way of life. Well, I like sad stories!
Also, it impresses me that a lot of time passes during the story, but it's not confuzing at all. Great job!
gaidek
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/21/09 | Reply
thanks
Sole Storyteller
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/21/09 | Reply
Amazing, a story about Rin! That's something you don't see everyday, LOL. It's funny, I ran into it randomly.
I really liked reading it, to imagine how would be her life as an adult. Your story is somewhat dark and sad, but I guess Rin would never fit into a human way of life. Well, I like sad stories!
Also, it impresses me that a lot of time passes during the story, but it's not confuzing at all. Great job!