This is adorable!
Its actaully drawrn very well.
Theres little defaults though. But there only small!
But it would be nice if you drew her other eye cause it looks kinda incomplete with out it =)
Oh and are you going to colour it, cause it would look alot better if it was coloured (i would think) And actually thats all for me i hope that helped
This is quite good (and I'm late to comment on this, I know ;__;) !
What about coloring it a bit or adding shades ? And if you could draw her other eyes, it would look more perfect <3
I don't see much issues, but I think the left foot is a bit more rotated than it should be and it kinda looks twisty. It could just be me. Other than that, it looks good!
Hm, looks interesting.. Let's see about it.^^ First off, I like the pose there and also the little details that you put. Some harder ones as the eye there is also very nicely done and no objection there. Nose and mouth placements and style look a little different than usual, but I am sure that they will look just well when you finish it. :)
About clothes, watch out for shading later. It can affect which part you actually want to be visible and more noticeable one. Another thing watch out to give equal number of details there. You have to see will you actually leave her arms naked or put something one them, because that other part down there like cloth bracelets. Also definitely remember to make the same appealing from both the first and second boot. The left one seems more detailed but distracted and one first sight smaller then the right one.
Still I like this and because I myself don't have much experience with it, I think that you are doing quite well for now. Maybe someone else will give you better advices, but as from me, just watch out on the balance of body parts and those that you want to stand out the most. Other than that, this looks quite well. :)
swizzledhazelnut
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/16/11 | Reply
This is adorable!
Its actaully drawrn very well.
Theres little defaults though. But there only small!
But it would be nice if you drew her other eye cause it looks kinda incomplete with out it =)
Oh and are you going to colour it, cause it would look alot better if it was coloured (i would think) And actually thats all for me i hope that helped
Felcie
Unicorn Lover (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/12/11 | Reply
This is quite good (and I'm late to comment on this, I know ;__;) !
What about coloring it a bit or adding shades ? And if you could draw her other eyes, it would look more perfect <3
NekoTenshiEmi
Two people, Nya~! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
@Allie Elric:
Yeah something is definitely weird in the feet! XD Thanks! I'll try re-drawing them! :3
NekoTenshiEmi
Two people, Nya~! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
@LightFykki:
Woah~ Thanks for the long Critique, Light! :3
I've been thinking of changing the boots since they are a little wonky :) Thanks for pointing it out!
I'll watch out for coloring too, don't want to get myself in trouble ;)
Thank you SO much for taking the time to write this out for me!!! <33333333
Allie Elric
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
I don't see much issues, but I think the left foot is a bit more rotated than it should be and it kinda looks twisty. It could just be me. Other than that, it looks good!
LightFykki
Drachen Herz (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
Hm, looks interesting.. Let's see about it.^^ First off, I like the pose there and also the little details that you put. Some harder ones as the eye there is also very nicely done and no objection there. Nose and mouth placements and style look a little different than usual, but I am sure that they will look just well when you finish it. :)
About clothes, watch out for shading later. It can affect which part you actually want to be visible and more noticeable one. Another thing watch out to give equal number of details there. You have to see will you actually leave her arms naked or put something one them, because that other part down there like cloth bracelets. Also definitely remember to make the same appealing from both the first and second boot. The left one seems more detailed but distracted and one first sight smaller then the right one.
Still I like this and because I myself don't have much experience with it, I think that you are doing quite well for now. Maybe someone else will give you better advices, but as from me, just watch out on the balance of body parts and those that you want to stand out the most. Other than that, this looks quite well. :)