It's really good :). All the lines rhymed well and the words flowed very nicely. When I was reading, I kept thinking that if this were made into a song, it could be Harmony's anthem or something (kind of a weird thought :P, but they did that with Star-Spangled Banner). Dolphins and green gnomes ftw.
balletninja
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/23/11 | Reply
@littlepooch:
Thank you!!!!
littlepooch
Patchwork Rabbit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/23/11 | Reply
@balletninja:
Oh, good luck than :DD
balletninja
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
@mmmchocolate:
Thanks MC!!!! Yeah, I know!!!! I wonder what made me think of gnomes though.......... ^^
mmmchocolate
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
It's really good :). All the lines rhymed well and the words flowed very nicely. When I was reading, I kept thinking that if this were made into a song, it could be Harmony's anthem or something (kind of a weird thought :P, but they did that with Star-Spangled Banner). Dolphins and green gnomes ftw.
balletninja
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
@littlepooch:
Thanks!!!! I'm actually submitting it to a literary arts magazine.... so it may or may not get published!
littlepooch
Patchwork Rabbit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
Aw no :D I really liked it!! <3 *cries tears of joy that someone likes CF so much to write a poem*