This story was really descriptive and it really went in depth about Light and his conflicting thoughts. You wrote it so well it gave me chills, and few things have the power to do that to me anymore. Great job! *hugs and faves*
So Good!!
I really enjoyed reading this...it sounds like something that totally could've happened! Light got so careless after L's death u know...>,> I was really unsatisfied w/how he acted and changed b4 his own death. Neway! You are a really good writer! Great word usage...ur descriptions were terrific! *thumbs up* ^^
Kyrianne
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/25/08 | Reply
This story was really descriptive and it really went in depth about Light and his conflicting thoughts. You wrote it so well it gave me chills, and few things have the power to do that to me anymore.
Great job! *hugs and faves*
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Sleeping Dragon (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/22/08 | Reply
So Good!!
I really enjoyed reading this...it sounds like something that totally could've happened! Light got so careless after L's death u know...>,> I was really unsatisfied w/how he acted and changed b4 his own death. Neway! You are a really good writer! Great word usage...ur descriptions were terrific! *thumbs up* ^^
Kaneya Uchiha
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/19/08 | Reply
Oh wow.... I almost cried when I read that... I like LightxL as a couple.... Really nice job! ^-^
Madison2294
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/08/08 | Reply
AMAZING!!!
Wonderfully worded and a really captivating story despite its length.