I write to bring a smile and to talk about how I feel, frankly sometimes if it weren't for poetry, when I was a tad younger, I'd probably have gone a little insane... or a lot insane. Your poetry is beautiful and tragic all in one. that makes reading it easier for me to connect with, I know loss and I know pain, but I also know happiness, and sometimes it scares me.. emotion into work of are, the truest form of expression
That was beautifully written, your little poetic review :) You have a gift~ And yes, there is pain...very insightful lol I tried a different rhyming pattern and style then normal. Longer too. Wasn't sure it worked but I guess it did lol
I actually have no big sentence for this, nothing big to say, all i can say is I've read it, and i felt a little pain. It feels like deepest heartache, or perhaps i misunderstand, but hurt is there I'm Certain and i feel the kind is grand. More than what is normal or should be felt by one, and i hope you will feel better by the time tomorrow is done.
jsh21990
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/31/15 | Reply
@twilight tiger:
I write to bring a smile and to talk about how I feel, frankly sometimes if it weren't for poetry, when I was a tad younger, I'd probably have gone a little insane... or a lot insane. Your poetry is beautiful and tragic all in one. that makes reading it easier for me to connect with, I know loss and I know pain, but I also know happiness, and sometimes it scares me.. emotion into work of are, the truest form of expression
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/31/15 | Reply
@jsh21990:
That was beautifully written, your little poetic review :) You have a gift~ And yes, there is pain...very insightful lol I tried a different rhyming pattern and style then normal. Longer too. Wasn't sure it worked but I guess it did lol
jsh21990
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/31/15 | Reply
I actually have no big sentence for this, nothing big to say, all i can say is I've read it, and i felt a little pain. It feels like deepest heartache, or perhaps i misunderstand, but hurt is there I'm Certain and i feel the kind is grand. More than what is normal or should be felt by one, and i hope you will feel better by the time tomorrow is done.