@twilight tiger:

That is a wonderful thing to hear and I think that from all this you can also learn you can't trust everyone :/
But I'm very glad that you both are back together and that he loved the poem ^^ Seems like he really loves you and it's a good thing that you were very understanding towards him :) but also trust is the most important thing so it's good that you told him 'no more lies' :)

I will be on theO more often so I will comment as much as I can ^^ and I love talking to you as well ^^

@ashio:

well turns out we got back together! Sorry I havent been on in AGES >.< but I don't have internet at his house...I'm at starbucks right now :P but yea, we got back together...my brain wasnt working right and my old best friend was putting negativity into my brain that spurred me to make the bad decision to end it. I blew everything out of proportion, and now I better understand what happened and why he did what he did. I just told him no more lying and it's gonna be a while to earn my trust again lol

I DID show him the poem about a month or two ago...about 2 weeks after I wrote the last comment on here I think? He looked at me with such care in his eyes, they were so warm~ you were right, he loved it :) that was before we got back together, but I was growing closer to him again.

We're better now than before, and that's strange seeing as how my life's real chaotic right now XD

Thank you tho :D I didn't realize it was that good and yea, there's more to the story than meets the eye, that's what I learned anyway. Everything has two sides...and you never know both until you investigate~ Like my favorite saying goes "don't judge a book by its cover". You may think it's one way when it's the other way around~

Feel free to message me or comment some more on things or whatever floats your boat ^^

I enjoy talking to you

@twilight tiger:

wow this poems means a lot to you then, thats amazing... I never thought this poem would have a lot more behind it than it appeared. Are you two not going out anymore though? Personally I think you should show him the poem, it's a nice poem and I think he'll like it :) what do you think?

@ashio:

well...my ex-bf inspired this poem. I never showed it to him though, I don't think. But this was before a very bad circumstance changed my life forever, before he lied to me, and before I broke up with him. We're still friends, and I'm staying with him now because of that bad circumstance, but yea, he inspired it. He's always there for me and I don't why...although he told me recently that he still cares and still has feelings. So he inspired it back when we were going out and he was suffering from remembering the past and what girls did to him and I was trying to tell him that I'm not like them and to trust me since it was something he couldn't do easily.

@twilight tiger:

Your very welcome :) Before everything happened? Is that a good thing or bad? (sorry for being nosy)
Keep up the good work with the poems :) by the way, can I ask what was your inspiration for writing this?

@ashio:

aww :) thank you~ I wrote this a long time ago before everything happened, I forgot all about it! XD

Aw thats such a cute poem, i really like it :) especially the line

At times I have to admit
With you, I will commit

Nice work! =)