@mickyodragon:

I have to wait then???D:
But I'll be patience..*tap a finger on the table* until the next chapter. *tap a finger*

@ecnelisterger:

Yes, Something did happen. But you wont really know until later

Ohho! Something happen!!! Something happen!!!! What's wrong with Ash??? Ash!!!!

@mickyodragon:

Ok! Can't wait for that!!!!!!! <3

@ecnelisterger:

Great!!!! I will get it proofread, and then put it up for you.

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Thanks, I will be working on it.

glad you enjoyed it

It's really a GREAT story Mickyo! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! It's wonderful. awesome!!!!

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LOL, you beat me. You're the first one to leave comment...

@Shizuki12:

Great! now I can tell my cousin that All my friends love the way he describes the world of the story. Glad you liked it shizuki.

Hmhm~ definitely a great story!!!! You know, I could felt Skandar's emotions!!! And the scenery was described very very well...I could imagine it all!!!!

@Shizuki12:

Have you read it shizuki? Did it work?

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Thank you. I am glad you liked it D-san!!

@mickyodragon:

Owkei owkei~ I'll try once again!!!! DX

@Shizuki12:

There shizuki, You should be able to read it now. Hope you enjoy

@Shizuki12:

What!!! Thats weird. Did you see the beginning of it. I know you have to push "see rest of post". somewhere. Just check and I will see what I can do.

Aww..there's something Mi-chan! I couldn't access your post...<:O I saw the title, but I couldn't see the contents...

@mickyodragon:

Yeah!! That's would be awesome!!!

@ecnelisterger:

Speaking of thumbs up. I just got it from my cousin. So next week I will put up the first chapter to see what you think!!!

Yeah!!!

@mickyodragon:

*thums up*!!! Good Luck!

@ecnelisterger:

Thanks E-san!!!! Depending on what happens when we finish it. I Might put the rest up on here. But we would need to figger out a few things first.

Great, Now I am exited, and want to get writing again. Thanks E-san.

Great prologue! I can't help but to read it till the end. There's something in the story that makes people wanna keep on reading.
So, I'd say, keep up! This will definitely turn out to be great story!