wow. *clap* *clap* i havent read one of your poems in a long time and i have to say this is great. it has great flow from beginning to end. and though ive read poems that have a repetive words that make no sense your "many excuses" was well used. you were able to put in the right places. the tone i get is one of like unrequited love or something similar where like one party is suffering more than the other. this is good very good. ^-^
noirassasin
Compulsive Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
wow. *clap* *clap* i havent read one of your poems in a long time and i have to say this is great. it has great flow from beginning to end. and though ive read poems that have a repetive words that make no sense your "many excuses" was well used. you were able to put in the right places. the tone i get is one of like unrequited love or something similar where like one party is suffering more than the other. this is good very good. ^-^
~noirassasin